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Re: Extra! Extra!- Chapter 2
On our second week at sea, the others that were fleeing Ireland and I decided to call our ship The Coffin Ship. We were crowded together, with barely a square ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: Extra! Extra!- Chapter 1
The potato crops were failing. My little sister and brother had already died from disease, and my parents were about to die. They told me to save myself. If I ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Men and the Machine (2 Spots Left, Not Started)
This is my first storybook, so if I'm doing this all wrong, tell me! Name: Liliana Moore Nickname: Bird, Birdie, any variation of Bird Age: 15 Gender: Female Country of ...
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: Men and the Machine (2 Spots Left, Not Started)
-reserves spot as well-
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Character Surveys
Name : High Princess Aine Human Name : Jackie Livingston Gender : Female Age : 13 Race/Ethnicity : Irish Seelie Court (fairy) Height (Fairy Sized ): 4 1/2 inches Height ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Character Cafe
I walk into the Cafe, trying to conceal my dagger with my green cloak. The girl at the counter looks at my bloodstained dress dubiously, but I still order a ...
Dec 31, 2011 -
Re: The Siren's Story- Chapter 3
I raced Merrick out of the palace, beating him, for once. I waved at Zale as we left the safety of the Palace, swimming quickly. Once we were out of ...
Dec 31, 2011 -
Re: The Siren's Story- Chapter 2
In the very center of the Atlantic Ocean, on the sea floor, was the palace of King Neptune. It was a grand palace, carved out of the stone of the ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: Publishing?
Thank you! This helps a ton! I never posted it on Facebook and the website always had a copyrite at the bottom of the page in my name. I'm in ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: The Siren's Story- Chapter 1
This is the story of the sidekick. People usually read about a person who is special, who has wonderful powers, who’s the most important person of the century. That’s not ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: Publishing?
I am in the process of trying to find an agent for the start of a hopefully four part series. I posted the whole of it on a different writing ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. President
This is good. It has an origional idea, which I like. I like how you use language that a kid that age would use. It makes it sound more realistic. ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you so much for this review. The actual book is not set in the 1300's but in the now time, as I choose to call it. Keep reading, I ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
Dearest Diary, Tomorrow is to be my wedding! I am not yet sure how I feel about this. I have been betrothed to the High Prince, Oberon, since my first ...
Oct 17, 2011
