crestfallen

Thanks to Snoink I was able to fix the double spacing problem

Thanks to Snoink I was able to fix the double spacing thing

Thanks to Snoink I was able to fix the double spacing thing

Thanks to Snoink I was able to fix the double spacing thing.

wow you really think you know your stuff...lol. What words were mispelled? I don't think there are too many mispelled words. I"m not sure why you said that. And as ...

Lame and outdated you wannabe

As I cease to breathe And I rot to bones I can see the me beneath heavy stones Their eyes seem to mourn as their heads sink low Their hearts, ...

I really like this song and thought it was really funny. I didn't quite understand why you had to use so much repetition because it only made the lyric twice ...

It's already in the lyric section. Anyway, I kind of liked this even though I could not relate to anything in it

Too cliche' and sickingly not original like the other person said. Also you should say it's your "first love" more like a "First crush" We as teenagers have no true ...

So the whole message of the song is that you like "fridays" I understood that Keep trying

This is overly stupid and pathetic

Nice Job!!! I prefer the morbid type of lyrics rather than the lovey dovey ones. The only thing I didn't like was the introduction at the beginning. It's no fun ...

Dude, you need to sing louder. It's hard to hear you on youtube. As for the lyric itself, I think it was much better than the "Pillow" one, although it ...

I didn't really care much for it. Also, I could barely understand what you were saying on the youtube video.