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Re: My Genuine Man.
This poem was a breath of fresh air. I adore the subject. You won't get any criticism from about the point of this poem or about what you were trying ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Mummy.
This haiku is interesting. Sometimes it's better to express feeling through few words rather than wasting too many words trying to get it right. I really like this poem. Thumbs ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Jolt
I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. Reading it was definitely interesting, but, at the same time, I wasn't positive about exactly what I was reading. I'm a ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Brown
This poem is amazing! The moral of the poem, its rhythm, its imagery...all are wonderful in my eyes! I like that you utilized some quirkiness as well, in lines such ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: End Of The World
I love this poem. I can definitely tell that you've written it to a close friend, to someone of importance in your life. True friends are so important. They're there ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Firefly Dance
Cautiously, attentively, I listen. Are they asleep? My ears catch the muffled, gentle sounds of snoring. Yes, they are. Anxiously, I mince past them and proceed down the hallway. If ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: It will happen again
Hi! First off, I like the subject of this poem. Everybody has bad dreams ( I know I have ), so it's something a lot of people can identify with. ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Be still my Soul
Hi! First off, this poem was beautiful. It reminded me of a dream, because, like dreams, it was a jumble of things that I wouldn't think of off-the-bat, but, when ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Just Trying...
Hey! My favorite part of this poem was the conversation between the teacher and the main character of the story. I'm not normally a huge fan of conversations being incorporated ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Time For Revolution
This poem is inspiring. I wrote something sort of like this but not nearly as good a while ago, and I only wish it would've turned out as excellent as ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: The Tenant
This story did what good writing should do: it brought me into the story and made me feel like I was right there, watching the whole thing happen. You used ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Friendship
I like it when people include pieces of their own lives in their poems. You've obviously done a lot of that here. Some things are, maybe, on the edge of ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: free
This poem is great! I love its rhythm. I also love how you express what you're writing about; it's understandable but not in-your-face like some poems are. Thumbs up from ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Patterns And Colors
This poem was beautiful, but in a different way than a lot of poems I've read. When I first started reading it, I thought it might be a poem that ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: I Will Chase the Wind.
Leaning back against my pillow, I sigh. A tear plummets to the open book in my hands. The book closes, and I close my eyes. It's been a hard day. ...
Aug 23, 2011
