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Hi! This poem was really sad, but it was done well. I like the way you kept it simple because it was a little kid who was telling the story. ...

I'm drifting, falling, flying away, away to the place where my dreams live. I'm blurring the line between reality and not, but whose job is it to sketch that line ...

This poem is so beautiful. It's the only poem I've read in a while that's almost made me cry. Even before I read the spoiler I sensed that there was ...

Hi!! This is an awesome poem. I can really feel the emotion behind it. It has some problems with punctuation, but you might have meant to leave that out, I'm ...

I used to think that I needed someone to love me. A strong shoulder to lean on, a warm hand to hold. But, as time goes by, I'm slowly realizing ...

He trod upon the waters as if they were a grassy meadow. He fed the multitudes with food fit barely fit for one man. He caused the weak to stand ...

Hi! I like this poem because it's simple, and I think that goes along with what you're writing about. It says what it's trying to say very well. I do ...

Hey! I like this! I like how you weren't completely clear about who you were talking about but I still got what you were saying. You might laugh, but this ...

Hey! At first, I was like, whoa, this writer needs to work on punctuation. But then, I kept reading, and I understood why you chose to let it go. Sometimes ...

Hey! This is a strong poem. Reading it reminded me of quite a few words that I haven't used for a very long time. Many times, when people write pieces ...

Shh. Listen. Can you hear that? It's the sound of war. Guns booming, sirens blaring, children crying, soldiers fighting, hearts breaking, tears falling, love dying, hate growing. Shh. Listen. Can ...

Hi! This poem is awesome! I like the way you wrote about your feelings. It was emotional but wasn't overly dramatic. It was almost like you were talking to someone, ...

Do you believe in magic? I don't believe. Well, not in the kind that is all clever trickery, trapdoors, smoke, and mirrors. I've outgrown that. But, I do believe in ...

Hi! First off, I get what you're portraying here. Trust means so much, and when it's broken, it's nearly impossible to get it back, at least the way it was ...

Hey, Storyweaver! Thanks for your comments. As to the age of my main character, I intended for that to be left to the reader's imagination. While I was writing it, ...