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Where are the clouds going? They always seem to be journeying away towards a destination that has never been revealed to me. Unending rows of fluffy white soldiers steadily floating ...

Hey!! This is an awesome piece of work. The imagery you used is breathtaking...while I read it I found myself drifting off into my mind imagining what you were describing. ...

Hollow, wailing cries, writhing in the streets, chilling the hearts of those who hear them. Never has fear been so fervently present as it is on the tongues of the ...

Hello there!! I like this poem. It's simple, but you still embellished it with details that made the story you were telling come to life. You pillaged and burned after ...

Hello!! This is a nice little poem. It's very simple; in fact, that's the thing I like best about it. Still, you managed to slip in some details about your ...

Hey! This is an interesting story. I like the overall feeling of it; it's casual and not overly wordy. I walked through the door of my home. Soaked wet. And ...

They caught him, the one black as pitch, and held him against his will. He shudders amidst the fences, despondent and degraded, hanging his head. Why won't they just set ...

Hey!!! This poem is interesting. I know how it is to be inspired by something to the point of not being able to get it out of your head except ...

I finished attaching the note and let the balloon float out to the end of its string. It tugged and jerked wildly in the autumn breeze, as if it were ...

Hey! First off, this is an awesome poem. I love the way it tells a story but tells me about the emotions of the writer as well. It really drew ...

What would happen if we left this place right now? Don't look at me like I've managed to lose my mind. You know you've thought this way before. We could ...

Hey! This is an awesome poem! The clothing that you wear Even the color of your hair I've never seen perfection Walk the grass like you And being that we ...

Hey Elinor! First off, I think this story has a lot of potential. There are some elements of it that I really like, but there are others that I don't ...

Standing amidst a flickering streetlight's puddled warmth, he stood, a solitary man, withered, his back bent by time, holding in his hands an instrument battered and well-worn. The people walking ...

Hi! First off, I like this piece. One of the reasons I like it is because it's a little unrefined, a little rough around the edges, and I think that ...