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Flowers bow down as the wind passes by, tilting their petals away from the sky. Grasses wave greetings as it goes past, moving in waves of shivering shafts. Leaves that ...

Hello there! Nice work on this poem! I like that you kept it down to a few stanzas; it was just long enough to make your point but not long ...

They line the painted walls, held in oaken shelves, ancient ones worn and cracked, others crackling with newness. Innumerable lines of marching characters, letters formed by jet-black ink, they speak ...

Hello there! I love the idea of this story. I also love certain elements of the way that you executed it. Especially in the first paragraph, the way you wrote ...

Hello there! :) Overall, I like this poem. It's fairly simple but you still managed to slip in some nice little touches that made it feel unique. So, well done ...

I remember. I remember sitting in the middle of the living room floor, a cup of juice next to me. It was a normal morning for me, a careless six-year ...

Hello there!!! I really like this poem! I love the concept of what you wrote about here. Actually, this poem is quite refreshing, at least to me, especially in the ...

Sea flows in, washes out, leaving foam behind. Smoothing sand, caressing beach, it sweeps away the marks. Empty eyes staring up, hollow caves where orbs once glowed. Ivory teeth, bleak ...

Blurs. Multicolored, smudged blurs surrounding me. The flashing of cameras, the soft-edged hues of fabric, the hard metallic surface of the bleachers....they were all morphing into one senseless blob

Hello there!! First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. I hope you like it as much as I do! If you've got any questions, ask away; I'm fairly ...

Hello there!! First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. I hope you like it as much as I do! If you've got any questions, ask away; I'm fairly ...

You were captured by a facade, an actress in a play. So marvelous beneath the lights, she doffed a mask by day. She wore a paper costume splashed with colors ...

Hello there!! :) First off, as soon as I saw the title of your poem, I wanted to read it. I've been sort of obsessed with writing about autumn lately, ...

Hello there!!! First off, I like the the style of your writing. It's clean but it still makes me imagine what you're writing about, which is a good thing. I'm ...

Hello there!! :) Well, now, this poem made me laugh. I'm sorry, it did. I'm not sure if it was meant to, but it did. As soon as I read ...