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Re: I don't exist!
Hello there! I love this poem. The meaning of it is almost dark but not quite. It's like you're teetering on the edge of staying here in the world and ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Reconciliation
Hello there!! I'm not exactly sure how I feel about this piece. There are some elements that I like and others that I don't. Imagine ten years have passed You ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Nothing
Just nothing
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: My Words are Silent
Hello there! First off, I love this poem. I find it very relatable to experiences I've had in my own life. It's hard to tell people your feelings when the ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: I Should Have Stayed
The soft, silky feeling of clean sheets against my smooth skin instantly relaxed me as I slipped into bed. I pulled the covers up to my chin, snuggling down deep ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: I am the Unknown Soldier
Hello there!! I genuinely like this piece. It is perfectly at home in the lyrical poetry category as it has an air of repetition. I love the subject of this ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Skeleton Dance
It sounds like the ocean. I always think that when I hear the wind rushing through the trees. Sometimes, I find myself getting lost in that sound, imagining that I'm ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Bottle
Hello there!!! I love the idea of this story. I love the whole 'message in a bottle' thing; it's something that's always been charming to me. I mean, I think ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Change
Hello there! First off, I genuinely like this poem; my favorite part is the overall feeling of it. It comes off feeling just a little bit raw, which I like; ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: The Thing About Broken Hearts
I don't think you understand how hard it is for me to have true feelings for someone. I think you think that I'm just a silly girl, a newcomer to ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: The Peculiar Red Ball
Hello there! First off I'd just like to say that your poem made me laugh. I was reading it and I didn't understand what was going on until I read ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Creation
Hello there! First off, just remember that everything I'm writing is simply my opinion. I'm not saying that I'm right, I'm just saying that it's the way I feel. So, ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Portrait of a Healing Heart
Bright scarlet drips from the bristles of my paintbrush, I'm sitting in front of my easel. Music trickles from my radio, but I'm not listening. I've retreated to a place ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Peg-board Butterfly
Hey there! I like the concept of this poem. I've never liked the way butterflies are captured and displayed because of many of the same emotions you conveyed through your ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Last Journey Home
Hello there! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here as much as I do. If I can help you in any way, just let me know ...
Sep 16, 2011
