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Sidewalks of shadows beneath black streetlamps. A bright icy moon amidst whirling grey clouds. Slithering somethings that writhe in the nighttime, and tortured lost ghosts that are mourning out loud. ...

Hello there!!! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here as much as I do. If you've got any questions, feel free to ask and I'll help ...

Hello there!! First off, I'd just like to say that this piece has quite a bit of potential. With a little bit of editing, I feel like it could be ...

Understanding what makes the world spin around is like attempting to grasp crystal handfuls of rain, yearning to know why the water shivers away through clammy fingers, streaming through desperately ...

Hello there! First off, I think that this is an awesome piece. The overall message that you portray is one that I think practically everyone can identify with: the want ...

I wasn't lucky enough to meet you. I have so many things I'd like to ask you about, so many questions that will be unanswered until I make my journey ...

Hello there!! I absolutely love this poem! I completely understand the emotions that are presented in it and love the moral of the story that you tell. I have absolutely ...

Hello there!!! First off, I think that this piece has quite a bit of potential. There are some elements of it that I absolutely adore, and others that I'm not ...

Sunlight pooled in his proud eyes as he gazed down at his world. It was, after all, his. He was no mere bird like a lowly sparrow or one of ...

A dew-sprinkled meadow laden with blossoms sparkles and shimmers in crisp morning light. Whispers of bird-songs sprinkle from treetops. The wind sings a soft song of days that have fled. ...

It used to be in the kitchen drawer next to the silver forks. They used it for bread and for lettuce heads and to cut up the slices of pork. ...

Hello there!! First off, what you were writing about in this poem was very touching. I think that expressing this story in a poem was an awesome choice. That being ...

Attempt to soothe with your sterile voice. Reach with your pale hands and try to caress me. Say that you know this searing pain, and I'll be thinking all the ...

Hello there! I love the subject of this poem. I'm not sure if you've read Charlie and the Chocolate Factory by Roald Dahl, but this poem brought to mind the ...

Hello there!!! I really like this poem. It's definitely short, but somehow I think that that works with the topic. What you wrote is concise and clear but still paints ...