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Hello there! First off, the element of this poem that I adore the most is the feeling that it has about it. It almost seems sleepy, but in a good ...

So...yeah. This is a piece I wrote. I'm not really even sure if I like it...any input would be great! I don't want them anymore. They never get any easier, ...

Hello there!! I genuinely like this poem. My favorite part of it was the feeling of the whole thing. It felt sort of rambling in a good way, like you'd ...

Hello there! First off, I really like this poem. Bad dreams are something that I have a huge issue with, so I could totally identify with you when I read ...

He's snuggled next to me, alert little eyes closed as he sleeps. I'm dozing off myself, slowly drifting away, when I feel him begin to move. I sleepily open my ...

Hello there!!! First off, this poem is amazing. You truly did a wonderful job expressing your thoughts in words that aren't everyday while not making it overly wordy. That's a ...

Hello there! First off, welcome to YWS. I hope you like it here as much as I do! If there's anything that I can help you with, just ask and ...

Hello! This is a piece I wrote quite a long time ago. I found it scribbled on a piece of notebook paper in my closet. It's long, I know. I ...

Hello there!!! First off, I love the feeling of this poem. It's almost the feeling I get when I'm reading a book that was written a long time ago, like ...

Have you ever heard of a little thing called plagiarism? Because that's what you've done here. I am a huge fan of a band called Breaking Benjamin. They have a ...

She hears the rain falling on the window, trickling down the frosted pane, and she stares out into the world. She used to know the world while standing outside, and ...

Hello there! The first thing I noticed about this story was the way that all of your sentences blended together, but not in a good way. The reason for this ...

Hello there! First off, I'd like to say that you have the potential for a great story here. Characters must be highly motivated in order to make the book interesting, ...

This is the first chapter of my book! I plan to introduce my main character's name in the next chapter. Any thoughts and criticism on this will be greatly appreciated! ...

Hello there!! First off, I just want to say that I'm a fan of short poems if they're done very well. For me, if a poem is going to be ...