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Re: Half a slice.
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I hope that you like it here as much as I do. If there's anything you'd like to ask about, please feel free to PM ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Pendulum
Hello there!! First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. It's an amazing place full of wonderful writers, and I hope that you like it as much as I ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Wonderland Philosophy
Hello there!! Very nice piece of work you've got here. Lewis Carroll would be proud of you! You incorporated the feeling of his writing without sacrificing your own style, and ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Newbie :)
Hey there! I'm Rose! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here as much as I do. I'm positive that being on here will help you improve; it's helped ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Christmas morning
Hello there! First off, I really want to emphasize that what I'm going to write about this piece is just my opinion. Everybody has different preferences, and just because this ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: BROKEN LOOK
Hi there!! I read the entire poem before reading the spoiler, and when I realized that it was about you, it made me sad, I'm not going to lie. I ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Eyes Like The Ocean
I like this piece, hope y'all will too!! In the midst of the pouring rain he stood, a warrior cold with a heart that bled fire. And cloaked in the ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Mr.Hyde and I
Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece tonight! First off, my favorite part about this piece is the feeling of it. It's actually sort of creepy! I ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Nine-O-Clock at Night.
Hello there! This poem is cute. There are some things about it that I absolutely love, and others that I might tweak just a bit. As I recall, it was ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The Jagged Tattoos of Regret
Please bear with me on this one. I know that it's probably a bit confusing, but I just had to sit down and let everything come out the way that ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Where there be an angel
Hello there!!! First off, I adore the concept of this piece. It almost seems, to me, like a fallen angel who has realized that she can never be with who ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Youth.
This is incredible. This isn't going to be a constructive review because there's nothing I'd change about this piece. It's got a feeling about it that almost put me in ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Your Green Hoodie
You left your hoodie in the backseat. I'll give it to you tomorrow when I see you at school. But for now, it's mine. In my bedroom, I pull your ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Harlot
Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'm going to be reviewing your work today! First off, I think that this piece of work fits perfectly in the 'lyric poetry' section. I ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Nothing
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Nov 1, 2011
