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Re: If Forever Ends, Chapter 1
Hello there! First off, welcome to YWS. I absolutely love this place; I've become such a better writer since I joined and have met a lot of other incredibly nice, ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 1
He reached blindly for the string and pulled, and the single lightbulb hanging from the ceiling flickered before shining steadily. The people on home improvement shows would hate this place ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Shadow Poets
Ever so beautiful, isn't it? This fairy tale life you live? Even your disgust is categorized, what you loathe dissected into neat lines of appealing banter, showing the world that ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: The Girl Who Flew Away
This is a contest piece inspired by the song 'Zac and Sara' by Ben Folds. As the front door clicked shut behind her, Sara turned and looked at the mountainous ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight Serenade Chapter 1
Hey there!!! Wow! I'm impressed. You said that English was your second language? You're very good at writing it! I only found a few places where it seemed a little ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Love is
Hello there! I actually really like this poem. It's different than the dozens of other love poems I've read; as opposed to me forgetting this as soon as I press ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: It Was Always Me
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! My writing has improved so much since I first joined, and there are so many excellent writers and people here! I hope you enjoy it ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Ladybug
Hello there! I have to say, I love this story. When I started reading it and seeing the direction in which the story was going, I hoped that it wouldn't ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Labyrinth of Days
This is a song I wrote. I also wrote acoustic guitar music to go along with it. It's supposed to have an acoustic/indie feel. It might seem a little bit ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Think
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! It's such an awesome place and my writing has improved so much since I've been here. I hope that you like it as much as ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Internal Battles
Hello there, Silence!! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here as much as I do. My writing has improved so much since I first joined, and ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Power of the Leaf
Hello there!! This is an interesting poem. I'm very inspired by leaves as well; I incorporate them into quite a few of my paintings and I'll usually add a few ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: New Beginnings
Hello there! First off, I'd just like to say that I can completely identify with the feelings in this poem. It sucks, doesn't it, when you wat to move on ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Death of the Night
Hi Mikko!!! This is a wonderful poem! It expresses the serenity of night-time nature and still somehow manages to tuck in a little bit of fear! I can't see any ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Another Bullet in my Heart
Hello there!! This is an amazing song! I write songs myself and this is absolutely incredible. I think that it'd sound awesome if you put it to some piano or ...
Nov 19, 2011
