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Re: It has been a long journey; at last, I have arrived.
Hello there, Enzo! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! First off, welcome to YWS. I hope that you like it here as much as I do! There ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Fighting Temptation
Hello there!! Now this is adorable! As a fellow chocolate lover, I can completely sympathize with you. I loved the way you wrote it; it was charming because it seemed ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Life Goes On
Hello there, Deanie! All in all, this poem was okay. I understood the feelings you conveyed. But, frankly, this poem just didn't seem special. I have no idea how many ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Human Pain
Hi, SweetEyes! Welcome to YWS! I hope that you like it here as much as I do. There are so many incredibly talented writers on here, and they're very friendly! ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: losing shadows, setting fires
Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! I'm not going to lie; your poem sort of put me in a trance. The imagery you used is ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: The Lanturn
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here as much as I do; there are some amazing, talented writers here who have a lot to share! If ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Dylan
Hi! My name is Rose, like the flower, the red ones are my favorite. I love it when somebody gives me a dozen of them because it makes me happy, ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Prom With My Mom
Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! First off, I'd just like to say that I adore your concept for this piece. It's so cute! I ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Prom With My Mom
Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! First off, I'd just like to say that I adore your concept for this piece. It's so cute! I ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Will Turner a.k.a Orlando Bloom
Turner resized.png This is a drawing of Will Turner that I created using a 2H pencil and a 6H charcoal stick! Hope you guys like it!
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: New (I'm still working on the title)
Hello there, Roxy! I'm Rose and I'll be reviewing this piece today! The overall feeling of this is good. You conveyed the nervousness of both of your characters. I understood ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Purple - part 1
Hello there!! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! Pertaining to the technical side of this piece, I didn't find anything wrong. Your punctuation and capitalization were excellent; ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Flee the Mortal Forms
You said that you needed to go, and I said I'd come with if you left, so we held hands and tried to fly. Before, the air seemed so light, ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Boo'Thang
Hi Alibri! Welcome to YWS! I absolutely love it here; my writing has improved loads since I joined and I've met quite a few nice, talented people who've helped me ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Life
Hi there Robster! (Or shall I call you James? Ha ha!) Anyway, I'm Rose and I'll be reviewing this piece today! Pertaining to the first two stanzas, I have no ...
Nov 24, 2011
