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Re: Repent
Hello there, AJ! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! I'm not sure how I feel about this one. It's quite repetitive at some parts, but some musical ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Tactics in witty poetry
Hello there, Runner. I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! This is a very cute, unique poem. Well, perhaps 'cute' wouldn't be the right word for it, but ...
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Re: When you call a Guardian Angel...
Hi, Magic! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. I'm not sure what to think of this. You said that it's a prologue? If so, it actually doesn't ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Why Turn Away?
Hey, Jess! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. First off, the subject of this poem is very good. It's very important and concerns more than just the ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Life, Heart and You.
Hello, Guilty! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. The first thing I saw when I read this piece was the title. Yes, I know that's obvious, but ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: The Life She Wanted
Hi, Crazedasian! My name's Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. I absolutely love it here, and I hope that ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Give me Love
Hi there, Misstoria! Wow. This is an awesome poem! Although it was cliche in some ways, they were good ways, not tired ways, and that's a hard thing to do. ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: I'm A Jesus Freak
Comments, please? :D So, you believe in God? Then make him make my momma come back. I can't, I say. You look at me like I'm stupid. So, you're a ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Hope ch. 1
Hey, CS! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! First off, I'd like to discuss your concept. It seems decent; writing about a girl recovering from an accident ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Dating Sucks
Hey Misstoria! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! So, you went with a story about vampires, huh? Oh well. It's not my taste (Twilight ruined it for ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Tombstone Wings
Comments, please? Sickly music drifts right through the ribcages of me and you. Once covered by our human skin, now nothing but air lies within. The weeping willows shriek, poor ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 2
Like, comment, and review, please! :D "Higgins!" a raspy voice barked. Entwined in a tangle of sheets, Sam cracked his eyes open and winced as sunlight streaming through the window ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Sam Higgins - Pencil/Charcoal Drawing
Sam.png This is a drawing of the MC of my novel, Sam Higgins. I felt like needed a visual reference to help me write, so I made this. I used ...
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Re: Crying - An Acrylic Painting
DSC09159 (622x800).jpg This is an acrylic painting I did a long time ago. Like and comment, please! Thanks!
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: I am The Unseen One's daughter, you are Death himself.
Hello there, Spark! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! Hmm. I'm not sure how I feel about this one. There are some elements that I love about ...
Nov 27, 2011
