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Mary Elizabeth walked down the halls of the hotel, not knowing what to do. She has already been in this hotel for far too long. She need peace and salvation ...

I think it looks nice. I like clouds.

No, don't change the title. I think it is so cute. I think this story is so cute, the title fits it. You have a few spelling errors though but ...

I just want to point out that maybe this should be under Fan Fiction instead of General Fiction or it could be under Fantasy. I would say Fan Fiction.

I beg to differ. This is a good story. I like how the details are. I like the feelings in this. But you mentioned that this was from a scene ...

Well, I think this is really good. There are a few things that needs to be fix. The arms on the girl. Give her elbows. Her legs needs knees too. ...

Merry was close to falling alseep when Charlotte and Jasmine came into the tent. They told her where the adnormals could be along with the king, in the maze. "All ...

Merry ordered two soldiers to escort or drag the prisoner to the far back of the prison, in the torture chambers. The two soldiers did what she told them to ...

Name: Mary Elizabeth Downey Species: Ghost age: 18 Please state whether male, female or other: Female Appearance: Long, curly blonde hair with a ribbon that ties it to hold her ...

Smokey Taboo by CocoRosie

He killed everyone in the cafe/bar. This is over.

I will say I am so happy some one wrote a zombie story. I don't see a lot of those around here. Okay, here's my review. Since this is written ...

"Oh, I would love to have the one with the gardens." Elta said with excitement.

"Yes, I would like a room. Do you have a room with a beautiful view?" Elta asked with a smile on her face.

"No, I do not mind. I come from the Elven Forest. It is far from here. I just came in for a meal and lodging. I have more places to ...