creativemuse1

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I like what the user above have said. The older man had a tall and filled-out figure. Not a hefty one, but one with meat on the bones. His face ...

This story is okay but it could be better. For one, you do not describe the surroundsing. You tell not show us, the readers, what is going on and how ...

Okay this is pretty good but you could make it better. First off, put more details and descriptions in the story. I feel like you are telling us, the readers, ...

A flower without light is doomed to die. Only your letters gave me the light I needed, but my eyes are so blurred I can no longer read them. I ...

This was pretty good. There are a few mistakes. 1) You switched from I and her to I and you. At one time, at a certain place, I fell in ...

The sea - so dark and sinister yet warm and disturbingly inviting The waves slam against the ship as we go northward toward home Home - England. Will we make ...

I like 5 and 4.

Stephan - Elf I rolled my eyes as I climb back on my horse. "Well, my work here is done. I am leaving. Mustn't keep father waiting for too long." ...

I smirked. "My name is Stephan." I got off my horse as I spoke. "You, werewolf, are on Elf territory. I see you are far from your clan or whatever ...

Twilight

I rode my horse, The King's Men, in the forest. As a knight of the Elves it was my duty to protect the forest and its people that dwell within ...

Name: Stephan Age: 18 Race: Elf Appearance (No Anime): (Didn't feel like describing what he looks like.) Personality:At times he can be strict. He tries to lead people to good. ...

Mary Elizabeth watched as the drama went down in the hallway. 'Stupid vampires. Stupid humans, Can't even defend themselves.' She thought to herself. She sat outside her suite. She still ...

Merry heard the news that the prisonar escaped. She ordered three groups to split up and look for him. She had a bad feeling about this.