creativemuse1

Wow, well, this is really explicit. You have some grammer errors. I can tell you really hate this girl, but there are other words you could use to express your ...

Well, I think this is a good start. I like this story. I like the beginning. Attempting to see where the car had stopped, she was confronted with an inability ...

Well, first, that was a good story. I really enjoyed reading this. Symptoms began with a mild cough, then a mild itch, then a mild headache. I think you should ...

Well, I have to say, the ending and middle kept me interested. But I was confused about the beginning. I notice some grammer errors. I, also, notice you don't go ...

Well, Let me say I like this story. It kept me interested. The beginning threw me off but after awhile it got interesting. You could fix the beginning. At times, ...

INSANEASYLUM CARETAKER 1: (fat and overweight, male) 7. INSANEASYLUM CARETAKER 2: (skinny and boney, male) Well, I would like to begin to say that isn't spelled Insane Asylum? May be ...

Well, I would like to say, that was a good, teenage love story. She couldn't believe how he could say that. He was supposed to be her best friend. They've ...

First off, The beginning did not catch my attention. To tell the truth, the beginning was pretty bad. I think you should make it more interesting. Catch the reader's attenton. ...

I would like to join.

I have to say, this is a good start. Jackson is still blaming himself for what he couldn't have prevented, am I correct? Well, I noticed some grammer mistakes in ...

Name: Meredith "Merry" Darkrai Gender: Female Age: 33 Appearance: Merry wears a mask over her eyes and nose, a sign of the resistance. She has long, flowy blonde locks with ...

Well, I would like to say that this was a pretty good idea. But in the beginning, I got a little confused and as the story progressed, I still was ...

"Mr. Mason, su hijo! Mira! Look what he did!" Wouldn't she say senor instead of Mr. if part of the sentence she is speaking in spanish.

I think it is good but you could make it better.

The scent of soap and aftershave clung to his freshly bathed flesh as he stood in front of a length full mirror. It should be a full length mirror. He ...