creativelyyours

I'm not sure if this is the best place for this, but since this is a review thread I'm hoping it's okay. I just published my first novel "How We ...

Thank you guys so much! I'll try to read and give feedback on your work as well, as soon as I can:)

I really enjoyed reading this. I'm not an expert on poetry, so I can't really give a critiquing review. What I can say is that I love your style. This ...

This is really good. Even though I already knew what Julie was going to tell Noah, I couldn't stop reading it until I reached the end. Your portrayal of the ...

You guys are awesome! I'm so glad you liked it. I stray away from actual poetry because I have limited knowledge when it comes to structure and lines, ect. Lyrics ...

This reads like a movie scene. Each line is quick and moving. I hope that makes sense. I keep reading it over and over again because I love the feel ...

It's sad that a person goes into treatment for one illness and comes out with another. I was aware of the physical side of effects of chemo, but to learn ...

Thank you KatTrain! I've never been so excited about slashes and corrections in my writing before:) I guess it's because other people are actually taking the time to read my ...

Photographs Flipping through the pages of forgotten memories Every photo depicts what we used to be But then I noticed a deeper secret exposure In every frame you were frozen ...

One of the best books I've ever read was A Separate Peace by John Knowles. There was something about Phineas. He just stuck to me and I couldn't get him ...

I think you wrote well for a five year old. I don't remember my sentences being that cohesive when I was that age. It's really cute.

Hate Which side should I take? Left or Right? My heart pound to make the right choice But there isnt a right choice There only Hate What the world is ...

This is an awesome opening. You wrote her pain and depression in a way that's believable. Anyone who's struggled with getting over a broken heart can relate to her emotions ...

Thank you guys for the reviews and feedback! It feels good to put yourself out there and get a great response:)

This was really powerful. I love the flow of it. I could visualize this being performed in a poetry slam with emotion in every word.