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Re: Dark Tide (Prologue + Chapter 1.1) - EDITED
Yay! Thank you! I'll set to work about the bits that you have pointed out!
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: The Overnight Bus
Nope you haven't been to harsh! Bring it on... I'll set about fixing those problems, and once I've done I'll re-post it. Thanx for reviewing!
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Rapid Reviews
Please could you review this please? It is an Action/Adventure but I really would like a full review which includes all aspects including the grammar, the characters, the plot etc. ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: The Gate Keeper ch 2
Hi. This is quite good and I liked it. Here's a few Nitpicks: was blossoming . J ust jump in its harmless, it will carry you to safety. Madeline asked ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: The Dark Goddess [1] Newly Edited
This is great! Loved it. The only thing was: Josette LaVie crossed over to where the iron cannonball lay This was in the third or fourth paragraph, and to me ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: The Overnight Bus
The Overnight Bus is just something I did when I was bored. The overnight bus was packed. I knew because my friend, Sophie had phoned me as she got on. ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Dance of the Demons
Hey! This is amazing, I really enjoyed it! I didn't notice any obvious spelling mistakes, and I don't have time to search really hard. I agree with CaitlinGrant that your ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: First Chapter - (temp. title) The Road Ahead
I think it's great so far, but it would be helpful if there was more description. "Farah Loughton." She blinked. Ms. Gorges was glaring behind her thick-framed glasses. "Stand up. ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Prologue + Chapter 1.1) - EDITED
Thanx! I can't believe I couldn't see the "moths" spelling mistake. I've gone over it loads of times!
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Yup, Another Newbie.
That's good then. You might have read Terry Practhett or James Barclay? I know my bro's read them. Wow, horses. I love them but if that was your only experience ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Prologue + Chapter 1.1) - EDITED
Hi! This is my new story which I have just started. Before you start reading, I know I use the words 'But' and 'And' a lot. Especially when starting new ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Angels and Vampires-Part 6
Okay, here goes my second review. I think it's a great story line and there's just one or two things which you must have not seen when going over your ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Yup, Another Newbie.
HI! Yes, it's yet ANOTHEr newbie. Well, I'm afraid your stuck with me for a while - sorry. Okay, a bit about myself? I am totally horse crazy, mad, insane, ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: The island (Time chasers) Chapter one
Hi! Okay, this is my first review so I'm sorry if it's bad. I like the way that it was speaking from the characters point of view (is that third ...
Jan 3, 2010