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Please will you review my story please? (You might want to read the Prologue and Chapter 1 first) Dark Tide - Chapter Two Thank you!

Okay, thank you!

Okay, hi! I need someone to tell me a bit about Dynamite and big explosions... if they know anything about it at all. Two of the characters in my book ...

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I love short story's, and have several collections of them which I have collected. I like writing them, but I find it hard to get a storyline which isn't to ...

Thanx for the review! Well, I prefer to keep thoughts in italics because sometimes I get mixed up with speech and thought, though thanks for the opinion! Also, I can ...

Yay! Thank you!

Hey, thanks! Will take a longer to the edits than I thought because I am doing my story Dark Tide at the same time.

This is okay, but there a lots of things you need to work on. It all happened on the 9th of December 1992 . T he air was freezing and ...

Wow, this is great. I love it and can't wait to read more. It has good storyline and good descriptions. I find the idea the Kara "tastes" colours really interesting ...

WoW! This is amazing! I love it! I've just started reading the first few chapters in this story, and I couldn't stop reading. I'm just stunned by this bit, it's ...

Again very good. Like the last part, you need to add some full stops and commas. You also need to add some speech marks. You might want to add some ...

Well done! This is good. You just need to edit a few things (PrettyCrazy pointed them out) but other than that its great, making me want to read more. In ...

I've posted Chapter Two up now. To see it click the Click To See Possible Related Items button on the top left of the page.

This is Chapter Two, hope you enjoy. EDIT: Just to let you know, I am still working (slowly) on my Character Development. EDIT 2: I am reposting the chapters in ...