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Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Hit.
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Opal: "Humans. *shudders* I don't see what people see in dogs and cats. And rats. And any other animal you care to name. I like humans because - duh - ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Chapter 1.3)
Previously: “We didn't know anything about your father till today. We didn't realize that-” Mark was saying as his throat caught. “We only heard about him today because he was ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Chapter 1.2)
I have split the chapters up into smaller posts to make them easier to review. Here is the second part of Chapter 1. Please read and review! Previously: I don't ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Prologue + Chapter 1.1) - EDITED
Thank you!
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Um, guys. Could we calm down?..." -James. "And talk about something normal like, um, The 18th way to kill someone with a pen - like the one Cara is holding ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: What would your characters do?
First, James would be confused and disorientated. Then he would quietly panic. He would try to harness his power onto another human who was a teleporter before finding out that ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
James Royale: "Running. It's a lot better than being chased by a maniac through a dead man's house where the door is painted with blood when you have a knife ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when... - You either nodded or said yes to most of the above (or you're characters have) or - Those that weren't true of you ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Title Feedback
This brings to mind something hidden in the book. It doesn't make me think about what the story would be about, instead, it makes me think: The cover might not ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Prologue + Chapter 1.1) - EDITED
Just done some small edits, nothing big as I believe in completing, then going over it all again.
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Chapter Three)
Okay, here's Chapter Two. I'm still still working on Character Development, but hopefully you are more in touch with the character at this point. I've also gone round and edited ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Chapter 2.1)
Thank you! I'll have a go at working on the few things that you pointed out, and I'll definitely proof read it! Thank you for explaining the difference between Your ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Jack's Critique Emporium [BACK IN BUSINESS]
Please could review the second chapter of my story please? (You may want to read the Prologue and Chapter One first!) Dark Tide - Chapter Two Thank you!
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: I'm but a poor soul looking for reviews? (Accepting)
Please will you review Chapter Two of my story, Dark Tide? Dark Tide - Chapter Two Thank you!
Jan 13, 2010