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9 - I like it. I'm immediately thinking about why she/he's running before I've finished the sentence, then why an assasain is after her. And why he/she is waiting for ...

I wanted somewhere where I could post my stories and get good feedback and advice on how to improve my writing. I spent a couple of hours on google, and ...

Heya. Does anyone know anything about Goblins? I'm co-authoring a story with my brother (this is interesting, because we've agreed to not to actually speak about it, so we don't ...

I agree with what everyone else has said, but try this; You say you're good at writing the good guys, so make another one. Give him good goals, reasonable ones. ...

I'm thinking more of just general names. Like these people with powers are another race, what they would be called. What the general public would call them - they are ...

Hey, So, I've got a new story idea which is really bouncing round my head at the moment which I have to write. It's fantasy, and on a world where ...

Heya! I'm not going to do a proper review, or anything, but... this is really, really, good. Or at least, it is in my opinion. :) I love the way ...

Wow. Okay, I thought this was amazing. Really, really, really good. I like to keep an eye on the fantasy forum, because it is my favourite genre. When I came ...

*sorry if it's a bit long* Anthony When Anthony woke up, he was lying on a bunk. He supposed this was where he was going to live from now on, ...

Anthony Anthony barely made it out of the plane before he threw up. The sick tasted disgusting, but he felt better afterwards. He stood up straight and wiped his mouth. ...

*oh okay. Oh and sorry for posting on Scions account... i was accidentally logged in as my brother... it won't let me delete :(*

Anthony It was hot; it was noisy; it was uncomfortable. Anthony had only been in the plane for about two minutes, and already he wanted to get off. The makeshift ...

Oooh! I like this - I've just read all the chapters that you've posted, and I love it!Violet is really intriguing, and I want to know what's happening. One thing ...

Hi! I read through both the prologue and the first chapter. The way the prologue was written was very powerful and conjured some wonderful imagery in my mind. I like ...