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Thanks! It's called Midsummer Night's dream because that it the play it's based off of, you know, Shakespeare's? I haven't found a different tile yet, but it is supposed to ...

The setting is meant to be a modern day North American school, so I obviously failed at portraying that. You mention that my character's speech is not current, how so? ...

I can definitely PM you! Your idea on Flute answered one of my main questions further on, should I change there names from the original script or not? Seeing that ...

Merci. Spacing issues are just because when I paste from Microsoft to here it automatically deleats all of my spaces and I have to put them in again. I somtimes ...

I'm sorry, but within about a minute of seeing you work I couldn't take anymore of the symbol things. They do work and I think they add somthing to your ...

That was... really short. Fine for what it was, but short and rather pointless. Oh, and if you really do write a script there needs to be something that separates ...

Here's an edited version, with Lysander's total character makeover. Tell me what you think. Egeus: Hermia’s wildly overprotective father. Very out-spoken and blustering. Theseus: The principal and F

Thank you so much for this review. I really appreciate what you have to say, and I'm glad you like Oberon! As I've said before, anything in my script that ...

That was beautiful, emotional, not at all what I expected. If you do edit it more I would sugest the third bit, it made the least amount of sense to ...

Thank you for you input. I think your right about Oberon, even I have trouble with his lines, and I should tone it down. You've given me the drive to ...

Thank you so much for that reveiw. I seenow that I have some huge grammer problems through out the script, and someof them were repeated so often in only this ...

I'm playing Scrooge in a school play (A mix of Oliver Twist and a Christmas Carol), and we were supposed to introduce our character to the world, his past, his ...

Thank you for the grammer! I suck at that, it's through endless revision that I've gotten it this good. As for your question about Flute... he's not Puck, but is ...

Yes, I have written more. The next scene is out. Thanks for the support.

Oh boy, I can just see what my science teacher would do with the idea of rapping. He actually had us roleplaying the different parts af a cell. I can't ...