cooldude19967

No, they are a special type of mutant from the sea who feed off of our happiness. Why are there only 26 letters in the english language?

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I'm sorry to say that you lost me after the first 5 lines. I kept reading hoping it would get clearer, but it didn't really help. I think it might ...

Overall zankoku_na_tenshi nailed almost everything I was going to say. One thing I'm wondering about, is what it it that the mom has done to them that has shaken them ...

I'm sorry, but within about a minute of seeing you work I couldn't take anymore of the symbol things. They do work and I think they add somthing to your ...

Recently the question has come up on whether or not I should modernize the names of my characters. I'd love your opinions on this, as I'm a bit stuck in ...

Hello Dreamer! I was wondering if you would take the time to help me by reviewing my script (or at least 1 section of it, all 6 are a bit ...

In the beggining of this you said We were still in the meadow that surrounded my house-and their apartments- when we heard The Voice. “Castra. Castra. Castra.” It whispered on ...

As other people have said, your main character has been well developed, but you need to develop the other pixies more. What I noticed was that it would be nice ...

I'm no artist, but I really like this! It looks really cool, almost like graffiti that has gotten partially washed off. I think I can see the letters too. Good ...

Hello ashleylee! I was wondering if you would take the time to help me by reviewing my script (or at least 1 section of it, all 6 are a bit ...

Act 3, Scene 1 The scene is in the band room. The entire band is there, all but Bottom frantically studying music sheets on the other side of the room. ...

I really liked this piece. You're right, in every school there is this kid. I liked how you ended almost every sentence with, "But I do." One thing is, you ...

I wrote somthing big, asked for editing help from friends, got none. Googled for a writing site, and came up with this one. It's worked (sort of) so far.

Hello Inksplatter! I was wondering if you would take the time to help me by reveiwing my script (or at least 1 section of it, all 5 is a bit ...