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Thanks all! Just a note, this is actually taking place on the day back to school from summer vacation, so I'm not sure it could really be considered Midsummer... and ...

Thanks a lot. If you want to read it it's currently called "A Midsummer Night's Dream Part (1-9)"

I see that your new here, but I don't think that this is the place to post this. In the other forum you should be posting you writing that isn't ...

I'm not a poet, nor do I read poetry, but I really do like the way you presented this! A couple of the lines felt a little bit off, such ...

I'm having trouble thinking of of a title for my play, and I was wondering if you guys had any tips/hints/ideas. It's a comedy based off Shakespeare's "A Midsummer Night's ...

All questions from earlier segments still apply. The main ones are: Did I over do Bottom's Character? What would be a good name for this script? Should I change the ...

Nice continuation. The fact that even though she had just been betrayed by someone she though was her sister and then could laugh at the thought of evil ducks, is ...

I enjoyed the reference to Tolkien at the end, but I can't remember anywhere in Harry Potter where he talked about that kind of thing, so that book reference didn't ...

Merci. Spacing issues are just because when I paste from Microsoft to here it automatically deleats all of my spaces and I have to put them in again. I somtimes ...

Didn't think I would, but i actually like the choppy style in which you wrote this story. THe only parts I didn't like were how you described how Maria was ...

Confusing. Interesting but confusing. To be honest, I didn't know the gender of the narrator until about half way through, and that little revelation put a new light on everything ...

I like it but hope there's more. You have absolutly zero plot at the moment. This could be a good introduction, it's very descriptive. I'd love it if you could ...

I really liked this. Especially the beginning, with the dreams. One thing I'd add though is if you could think up another one that would be nice. Three just seems ...

That was way to long to be posted in one part. Very few people are actually going to read it the whole way through. Anyway, from what little I did ...

Act 4, Scene 1 The scene is set in the band room, where the lights have been turned back on. Titania has returned and is fawning around Bottom, who is ...