cooldude19967

Show don't tell... show don't tell... The best way to describe it is to show you. (oops, I did not mean that!) This's what I'll do, I'll take a couple ...

Are you talking about a person named "Anyone"?

So, like, one day there was this dude, right? And I saw him, like, walking his stupid pink poodle, right? Sentence: You don't have to complicate it!

peanut-butter (hyphens fix everything... or at least they do when the first thing that pops into your head is two words... I hope...)

coast (also not checking 93 pages)

I know how much other people on this board have helped me out when I needed it, so I'm here to return the favor. If you need anything reveiwed I ...

Well... I warned you I was rather harsh. If you want my review see the attachment, I din't want to have to bother with making everything red again whe I ...

Thanks! I am going to edit this, and I'll definetly take what you said into consideration. It's sort of weird how most of my writing comes out dark, because I'm ...

That... was amazing. I absolutely loved it as a whole, one of the best pieces of poetry I've read in a long time. However, I'm still picky enought that there ...

It’s dark. It’s always dark. Inside my mind and out. It’s dark and I’m trapped, in more ways than one. Do you know what it feels like to be trapped? ...

That was a very good rewrite of a classic story! you really put a lot into you MC (I wanted to say heroine but...) and it turned out really well. ...

Act 4, Scene 3 The scene is set in the band room, but it is tidier now and the piano is gone, moved into the classroom. The band’s backpacks are ...

Thanks a lot Springrain! Those were defietly mistakes, I don't know how I missed them while I was editing... thanks for pointing them out.

Thanks for the response, sorry it took so long for me to get back to you, but I'm back now! I tried to make Puck's accent as extreme as I ...

Wow, extreme is right! I only just found that you could post somewhere separately from the reviews!