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Very nice! You captured the feeling of that situation well! The only critisim I noticed that really distracted me was this, you used the word hell way to often. That ...

Yes, thanks for that. I'm a bit sloppy in my typing sometimes. I'll try to keep it neat. And yes, as everyone's asked I have read the rules. In several ...

Honest opinions are what I'm looking for, unfortuntly, not mny people read scripts so I've only gotten one reveiw. I'd apprecite if any of you would give it a look. ...

Hello Jamie! Nice to meet you (sort of). Basically I was trying to read everything new (an impossible task) when I came up with your post and read it. Figured ...

Very nice! Your portrayal of the grim reaper was great! I'm a bit curious about his boss, but assume that will be cleared up more as this goes on. Keep ...

I like your concept and your characters, but I have two questions: 1. What is a lang? I know they're somthing that is attacking and that they have hands, but ...

Better. You described more people and it was more interesting than your last. The ending seemed a little off to me though. And why dosn't kel have time to think ...

I also have not read the beggining of this, but what I have read sounds good! Because I havn't read the other bits I didn't know there was anyone else ...

It took me a while to get into your script, but once I did I could visualize it easily enough. I like the character of the boss. To me the ...

Thanks a lot for your imput. It's especially nice to get seeing as your doing the same kind of thing. I never really though of keeping ties to the orgional ...

Thanks! I've read all of the rules and guildlines already, you've got it set up on a sticky on everyboard so it's sort of hard to ignore. I write scripts ...

A very good story! It kept my attention right to the end, and more. I know very little abbout the time period you are writing from, but the scene came ...

Very good! I haven't read this series in a while, but you brought it all back to me! I hope you continue this, I'd like to see more! 1 question, ...

I've read Tamora Pierce, actually, I just reread this series, and I still have to say it makes little sense to me. It needs some major editing and seems to ...

So far, I'd have to agree! I've already looked around at bit at someother stories, and I'm sort of astounded. I seem to be one of the youngest writers here! ...