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Bravo, much better! And your first time around wasn't shabby either! I've kept my review in the same document as before, mostly so that I wouldn't go over it and ...

Thanks so much for your advice 299397. It looked very usefull and I will definetly apply a good bit of it. One question, exactly how did the first bit that ...

Thanks for ther high praise! It's always nice to hear that along with things to fix. As for Being acted out... they said we'd vote today, but it was put ...

Finished! Nice signature by the way. Anything else?

Lyrics... well this is new. To be honest I've never even looked in this section and would not have noticed your work if you hadn't asked me to review it, ...

Thanks all of you for your review. Anti-pop I really appreciate the depth you put into this, it helped a lot. I think I agree with you an the watch ...

Thanks a lot Krupp, I agree it's annoying to see something with no reviews, especially when your on the receiving end. But I can also see why people wouldn't want ...

Because aliens take over our minds and tell us to ask them. Why is making up conspiracy theories so fun?

She wants to scare the goblins away from climbing back up her/his nose. Why is "q" the first letter on the keyboard?

I don't know but I think it looks like music to a deaf person. Why did we invent italic?

The jellied insides of brown rats. What food group is popcorn in?

A dark young girl, who is slightly insane a wears rags because she does not have enough money fro proper clothes. Rats... can't think of one.... give me a moment.... ...

Gaudy night: Woman tries to solve mystery at oxford while dealing with her feelings towards another male detective.

A more typical every day type story set in a high school with an arrogant male for the MC, who is a real jerk. All in a day.

A hero from a fanasy book, you know the type, the bad rougish one who's only on the good team for money or somthing like that. But turns out that ...