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That was... really short. Fine for what it was, but short and rather pointless. Oh, and if you really do write a script there needs to be something that separates ...

Wow. That's depressing. I really like the way you portrayed the boy in the last line, for some reason that stood out to me the most. Overall though I could ...

I'm not sure why, but I really, really like this. I think you've hit on a very good idea, although it's rather strange reading the epilogue first. I almost feel ...

Act 2, Scene 2 The scene is set in the hallway. Titania enters with her crowd of girls, obviously fuming from her encounter with Oberon. Titania: Girls! Come here! No, ...

Your story is good. I needs editing to get rid of a few simple mistakes, but I agree with Todge about the unique way your MC found out about her ...

Hello! This is a really, really long piecve of writing, and I'd think you'd get amny more people editing it if you broke it into pieces. Anyways, because of the ...

Here's an edited version, with Lysander's total character makeover. Tell me what you think. Egeus: Hermia’s wildly overprotective father. Very out-spoken and blustering. Theseus: The principal and F

2/10 I'm not much into the anime cat person thing, and the fact that I can't read the writing annoys me. I need to know what it says!

The main thing I noticed was how the first paragraph seemed almost choppy at first. I think that you talk about so much in that little sapce that even though ...

Thank you so much for this review. I really appreciate what you have to say, and I'm glad you like Oberon! As I've said before, anything in my script that ...

Here's the next bit. An overveiw of the characters can be found in the other parts. I've tried to correct all of the issues that have been mentioned to me ...

Thanks! You've given me three really good ideas that I never would have though of but that should have been obvious! I really appreciate it!

That would definitely work, seeing as it's a script. Thanks.

Right now I'm having to totally rewrite a character in a piece I'm doing, and I'm at a loss of what to do. I'm looking to make all of my ...

I was just wondering, for those of you who write constantly, is there a set way you edit that seems to help you catch your mistakes best? How do you ...