cookEmonster

This is truly amazing. I literally have tears in my eyes right now. I can feel the emotion radiating off you're work. I'm speechless... -CookEmonster

This is amazing. Incredible. It's message is so deep. It's that good that I have a complete loss of words. (: Good job! -CookEmonster

Chapter 1 Chapter 8 Chapter 10 It was so much to take in! Too much! The urge to run through the forest hit me full force. So basically, I was ...

"So are you done unpacking?" Asked the voice on the other side of the receiver. It was sunset in London and the sky was clear and cloudless as it change ...

Thats really good. It pulls me into the story and lets me take place of the main character. I like your style of writing. It really makes me want to ...

That's really good! I love the life you put into the dialogue. I could really imagine hearing that conversation while passing a room with cleaning maids saying that. (: Good ...

Thats so amazing! It made ME want to cry at the end! Its so sad ): BUT I LOVE IT. hahahah. -CookEmonster

HAHAH. I absolutely LOVE this! Its so hilarious! :P You're writing style in this is really good too. -CookEmonster

This is really good! I like how you combined the details and added a city down below. It really draws you're eyes into it. I'm not sure how to get ...

I wrote this a LONG time ago. It's surprisingly good (at least I think so) for have written it when I was younger. I wrote it with my cousin Mya. ...

I agree with RedFang on "I am just speechless on this piece of work." Hahah, It was amazing! I like the rhymes you put in too. :D well, we all ...

This is great! Hahah. I love but hate the cliff hanger at the end. :P I really like the characters- you described them in a way where you didn't need ...

WHHYYY. Please write more! Hahah, I'm dying here. (Even though you wrote it in March)

This is so good! Hahah I'm only on the first chapter so far but don't worry- I'll be reading the rest as soon as I get something to eat! xD ...

Oooh thats really good! Hahah, and that humanoid figure is pretty creepy. I liked the way you described it. It let me imagine everything that was going on. ;) Well, ...