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This is so good! :P Can't wait until you write more! I'll leave the criticism up to someone else to do. ;) -CookEmonster

You have noo idea how much in love I am with this! Hahah, I loooove it! xD BUT, of course, I have some things to criticize(; I don't know why ...

Alia's character is really complex. Maybe take a little time to explain her more? I have lots of trouble trying to keep up with her personality so much that it ...

Chapter 1 Chapter 10 Chapter 12 Its been about 3 and a half weeks since I last changed. I've been feeling sicker each day. Its like I caught a really ...

Yay! Good chapter. (: (As always! I love your story xD ) And it was definetely exciting to me! Can't wait for the next chapter! :) -CookEmonster

WRITE MORE. PLEEASE. I'm having 'Take A Chance Deprivation'! D: (If there were such a thing that is, hahahah.) This story is SO good! AHH. I literally cannot wait for ...

I agree with 567ajt, you make me feel ashamed of my own writing too! This is such an amazing story. I wouldnt be able to write anything as close to ...

I love it! I can't wait to read more! I really like the description you put in it. The story seemed to bring me out of reality and into it. ...

Chapter 1 Chapter 9 Chapter 11 I cracked my eyes open to find blinding sunlight attacking my eyes. I slammed my eyelids shut immediately and groaned. I really needed to ...

Be My Eyes Contest Entry. I hope you like it! (: -CookEmonster The Moon. The Moon is the coldness in winter, The whispers of the leaves and grass quivering in ...

ITS SO GOOD. ADD MORE, HURRY. xD I love it so far! hahha, I really like how you feel like your part of the story and all. This is definetely ...

I like it! :P But I have to go back and read everything else hahah, its all confusing to me right now. I promise I will! xD Its really good ...

Sorry I just felt like pointing this out 'cause it was so darn funny! :) I didn’t have a subject for my psychology paper. Where did you get a subject ...

This is really good! I don't have any criticism at all xD This is the first chapter of 'Mr. Angel...' that I read but I can tell already that I'll ...

Wow, thats so good! WHY did you have to stop there? DID SHE DIE?! D: I like how its the utter truth about jockeys, how so much stress is put ...