convintojm

i thought the writing was really simple and so i foudn it to be uninteresting. i didn't believe the characters either because what defined them was too simple. in addition ...

Should I forgive you the too many mistakes you’ve made? You test the durable and generous bounds of my love, which is caught between limitlessness of my childhood that convinced ...

A little simple and i think a lot of people will feel like yeah i've heard it a million times but i think you also added a little fresh imagery ...

A little bit confusing but i still feel like i can understand the feeling behind it even if i don't understand the intent of every line.

It's really simple and general and left no lasting impression on me at all. I got to the end and had no concrete feelings toward it. i think it woudl ...

It really gives the reader a strong sense of mood feeling and i love the specfic details and images.

some ideas are kinda fresh and interesting but i also found a few stanzas a bit trite. i think it would be a pretty good poem if they were all ...

i too think you need to expand upon it. you've got what you want to say outlined and that's good because soemtimes it can be difficult to know what you ...

very cheesy and cutesy though it might make a nice card for her sometime. if you wanted to improve it i would add some specfics and not worry about rhyme ...

i liked the first stanza but the last stanza seemed tired with so many mentions to unlocking sort of things. it was like yeah i get it are you done ...

the topic could be interesting but it's addressed too directly and without enough thought.

i kept expecting the worser things to be identified. and i like the use of the word worser cause i here it more often from people younger or less mature ...

nice. i like the bit of a twist ending.

kinda redundant and a rather depressing ending that i didn't really like and didn't really seem to fit with the poem.

too much repetition in a short time and does little to capture the reader.