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Re: The Swan
Omg. This has honestly left me a little breathless. It's a wounded girl, unknowingly stripped to her core by a stranger, but one who is willing to ease the wounds. ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: 9/11/2001
It's a nice dedication to the tragedy that is 9/11. I very much admire that you paid your respects through writing.(: Now, to go more in-depth... I don't necessarily agree ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: And Then There Were Two: Part 2
I come bearing gifts! I hope this meets expectations. Any and all feedback is more than welcome. /*/*/ Day 3 – 9:02 am The dream was just so frighteningly vivid… ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Oh My Love
It's sweet. Reminds me of Elizabeth Barret Browning with some Shakespearean tones thrown in. lol Just be mindful of grammar and and punctuation. Though, considering this is poetry, you may ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Head in the clouds
Haha! Cute. Definitely amusing.
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Never Alone
This confused me at some parts, but it was awesome. Never Alone by Barlow Girls, right? I love the connection you made to the song. Not exactly what I had ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: And Then There Were Two: Part 1
Because I've made such a mess of posting this darn story, I'm just going to post Days 4 and 3 here together. I'm sorry for any inconvenience... This isn't my ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Can I get some help please?
Hmm, never mind. I've decided to just post it as a novel.
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Can I get some help please?
I've posted this story that is too short to be considered a novel, but it's too long to just make one post as a single topic under short stories. I ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: And Then There Were Two: Day 4 - 4:24 pm
So, I realize that I've made a really big mess of just trying to get all of this story posted, and I'm truly sorry. I've decided to post this instead ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: She Is Numb
I cannot tell you how much I feel for this. I honestly relate to it, for reasons that I wish I didn't. Tell me if i'm wrong here, but this ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: In Memoriam
This, was absolutely touching. I've been thinking a lot about 9/11 lately, for numerous reasons - not that I've lost anyone, but I think i'm just more aware. "Did you ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Gone With You~Beginning
Love it so far. Hope you continue with it. I'm interested to know how you've planned this out. I like some adventure and mystery hehe. Just a few things I ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: And Then There Were Two: Day 4 - 4:24 pm
So, I realize that I've made a really big mess of just trying to get all of this story posted, and I'm truly sorry. I've decided to post this instead ...
Sep 8, 2011
