constantia

Because you haven't had a review for this chapter yet, and you had left a lovely one of support on mine... I thought maybe to return the gesture. I know ...

Omg... This was honestly amazing. I wish I could give you a better review with some actual constructive criticism, but I'm not the best poet. Haha You told such an ...

Omg this was amazing. That's all I have left to say. Haha

Haha, I liked it! Your narration gives the story its own kind of levity that's pretty refreshing. But I don't feel like the plot's entirely linear. If you had used ...

/*/*/ Day 4 – 7:39 pm James, now sitting in a fresh black v-neck t-shirt and comfortable jeans, still had his left hand tangled in Abigail’s. He had decided to ...

The usually merry breakfast table was still, the only sounds those of porridge being chewed and milk gulped down. I think you're missing a word or two here. I'm not ...

Hello! Do you mind reviewing my story? It isn't finished yet, but the last chapter should be up some time tomorrow. It'll only be four parts in all. Words less ...

That was pretty amazing. A little confusing, but amazing nonetheless. Now, if I may address some of those confusing points...?(: “Now get out of here you worthless brat!” Millicent barked. ...

This was too amazing for words, honestly. It reminds me of all the things He is capable of. It's pretty heartwarming.(:

She began to cry, he could hear it in her voice, even as she tried to brave the inevitable for him. She knew that was what he needed. He already ...

/*/*/ Day 4 – 4:42 pm “Everything will be fine, sir,” the nurse soothed, her tone hardly hardening as her professional self returned to the surface. James was quiet as ...

Juxtaposition isn't primarily a poetry term, but it just has to do with the way things (perhaps words, phrases, scenes) are placed together, whether that be in contrast with each ...

This gave me goosebumps. I'm honestly trying to push that "awe-moment" sensation aside, so that I can give you a proper review, but it's kind of difficult at the moment... ...

Oh crap. lol In all honesty. I went into this thinking it would have something to do with jealousy. And maybe it does, to some extent. But essentially, it's just ...

Hi! A friend of mine seems to have the same kind of beta criteria as you, so I'm pretty sure I can take it. But to be honest, it still ...