constantia

Author's note: I hadn't written anything in at least two months. That said, I'm a little more than rusty. So, I'm about 80% sure this is complete crap. Haha I ...

So... I will start reading and quoting/commenting on the way. My opinion will be at the end, kay? Kay.(: Hope I don't come off too harsh or whatnot. If you ...

Hello!(: So sorry for the delay, but here's that review you asked for... P.S. Since I'm feeling lazy, I'll paste the whole thing here and insert my comments in red ...

Chapter 4 -- Part of the Journey I know it's a chapter of a novel and you said that you'd rather not review it, but I think it could be ...

First off, I just wanted to say that this reminds me of 1984 . Haha And I don't see any grammatical/punctuation errors. The only thing I really saw was: "In ...

I'm so sorry about the delay. In all honesty, this wasn't even supposed to be the next installment for this story. It was actually supposed to have been part of ...

This was... lovely. Just lovely. The ending was extremely heartbreaking, and the build to it was wonderful and really well done! Favorite line: "His lips were slightly parted, the way ...

Sorry again for such a long delay... Life got in the way. lol ...But to return to the matter at hand, I don't like this chapter. Just gonna say it. ...

Do not be deceived! There is going to be one or two more chapters after this. "To Ends" is simply the title of this particular chapter.(: I'm so very sorry ...

Very emotional. Love the story it tells. All I want to point out is did you actually mean "what a fucked up lie"? Or was that supposed to be "life"? ...

And... I'm back!(: *Note: It isn't absolutely necessary to have read And Then There Were Two, but just know that these are the same characters, and that that is why ...

This was absolutely amazing! Such a lovely, fun work to read. The way you set the stage is honestly what enchanted me and kept me reading. You can paint a ...

First off, just to warn you, I don't really like to beat around the bush when reviewing/beta'ing a piece. That doesn't mean, however, that I am insensitive to the author's ...

I have come to fulfill your request!(: But... because this is such a long piece, I might need to split up this review into two or more posts. Well, unless ...

I liked it! Entertaining and cute(: But just a few things to address, if I may... I personally thing the first two paragraphs were a little choppy. It didn't flow ...