confetti

This is so wonderful in every way. The beginning caught my attention pretty much instantly! I love how you used a subject that really means something to you, and I ...

Okay, so first off, I really enjoyed this. It was interesting how you jumped quickly from scene to scene. It reminded me a lot of a movie. I found that ...

This is lovely and haunting and mysterious all at the same time. I love how you used the idea of a song and turned it into a metaphor (or at ...

This was ADORABLE. I like how the thoughts are very simple, like that of a child. One of my pet peeves is when people write from a child's point of ...