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:arrow: Upon making contact with the water all other noise ceased. I can no longer hear the crying babies nor the screaming mothers, now the silence is so deafening that ...

:arrow: "Now young lady, you dont talk to your Auntie Shiela that way." Taylor was looking at me as if i was trying to kill Shelia. "She's not my Auntie." ...

Even though the story about the 3 houses was a common one, not all newcomers were told. The townsfolk believed that the houses were haunted for a reason. Something was ...

Even though the story about the 3 houses was a common one, not all newcomers were told. The townsfolk believed that the houses were haunted for a reason. Something was ...

:arrow: yeh the blood part is still going through the "fix" lol thanks though, thats what i'm aiming for, the whole gripping your attention thing.

“That should do it.” I said aloud as I put the finishing touches on the last chapter of my new horror book. I had already written one book. It hadn’t ...

awosme....i can almost see her, her eyes are a big part though, i always notice the eyes... "windows to the soul"lol :shock:

'And this was as if gold was dangling in front on his face. " i thought sentances were never too start with "And" maybe i'm wrong but i really liked ...

exactly, a girl just gets freacked out and finds out she's crazy.lol :lol:

"He downed it in one gulp and proceeded to wipe the crimson moustache off his face with a frail stemmy green arm." that line is awsome~! lol g very imaginative ...

:arrow: she is a SHE and she's got a split personality sort-off i'm not sure really. i just wrote it to get it out. that's one of my weaknessess other ...

mine was about a dolphin that wanted to play with the other dolphins but his mom wouldn't let him. then he found out all the other dolphins got eaten by ...

“So why are you going camping again?” asked Kailey, one of my best friends. As I loaded my trunk, full of camping gear. “Just cause”, I answered for the fiftieth ...