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  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish

    Granted-But only because you lost all mobility in your limbs, and he feels sorry for you. I wish he lived in the same state as me

    Jan 27, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kiss me *freewrite*

    The reason I didn't give much detail, is becuase I want it to seem as if this little bit could be anyones story. Notice it doesn't even say if it's ...

    Jan 25, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kiss me *freewrite*

    I have not written in a very long time. Figured this would be as good a way as any. "Mm," the soft sounds you make while I kiss your neck ...

    Jan 19, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Model Prisoner

    "She owned nothing more clothing than that regulation slip;" No more clothing----No clothing other then that regulatio slip "sexuality limbo, your intimate parts removed and replaced with snap on pros

    Apr 10, 2006
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Mirros that kill

    “Click” the lock to the bathroom door sounds, and I breathe a sigh of relief. Resting my back against the door I ponder what John had just told me. What ...

    Mar 15, 2006
  • Archive Re: Narural born maniac

    "Shutup," John grumbled. "We Grifins also have very refined hearing, don't be talking crud to me!"

    Mar 15, 2006
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Mirros that kill

    I know the beginning is one big question. literally. i thought about him diseasing her. but the clencher is only she sees the everyone else she looks perfect. So he ...

    Mar 15, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Topics of Conversation

    “Not too shabby, eh?” he said, as he eyed the menu –with the word La Mar printed on the front, in big, silver, bold letters- the receptionist had handed to ...

    Mar 13, 2006
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Into the Mind

    Could you possibly go into more detail on the angel? Is she really gorgeous? Or more alien, since she's not human. If his wife dies does the angel live? and ...

    Mar 12, 2006
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Mirros that kill

    “Click” the lock sounds, and I breathe a sigh of relief. What if he’s serious? What if he’s not lying? “Stop it Nicky, he was just messing with you,” admonishing ...

    Mar 12, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mirrors that kill.

    Thanks my mom pointed the poor structure out to me:( i HATE starting a new story. I'm going to try to merge it with another story... so maybe i can ...

    Mar 12, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mirrors that kill.

    “Click” the lock sounds, and I breathe a sigh of relief. What if he’s serious? What if he’s not lying? “Stop it Nicky, he was just messing with you,” admonishing ...

    Mar 11, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mirrors that kill.

    Flattening my body against the wall, I squeeze my eyes shut. Upon opening my eyes I let out my breath. I’v been holding it, without even realizing. The hallway I’m ...

    Mar 11, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Roping Dolls

    Who's Jonny Jay? The beginning was a little confusing, love the "Hang me Barbie" box idea. Beck seems more angry than sad. Like she resents that Stacy "hanged" what conditon ...

    Mar 10, 2006
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Online Anorixia prt. 1,2 & 3

    PART 1: "I'll be home late so why don't you eat a sandwich" the voice on the other side of the phone comes in blurry. Cradling the phone against my ...

    Mar 9, 2006


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