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Heya there, I meant to reply earlier, but things have gotten busy. Thank you for stopping by! Hm, I never thought of it like that. I think when I was ...

Hey, no problem! And okay, if that was your intention, then that makes sense. I can see now that yes, his lack of emotions are related to his being detached. ...

Okay, thank you for clarifying!

Heyy! And of course I can tag you! I honestly don't mind. Part 4's coming soon - just so you know! Ahh, okay, I see. I didn't notice that sentence ...

Yay, characterization FTW. I love it oh so much. I will say that I am passionate about this story (and others, but right now, this one) so maybe that's why ...

Not at all; definitely helpful:)

Hey! It's totally fine! I understand -- I'm not as active as I should be. For the same exact reasons as you said. But you don't owe me anything; I ...

Oh, wow, that's good to hear:) I hope that this story can live up to that as it goes on haha~ And okay, that makes sense. I think I was ...

Hi there! You make some awesome points about the vocabulary. Yes I've always had trouble with vocabulary and descriptions in general. Sometimes, I try too hard "pretty the words up" ...

It's totally okay:) and whatever is most comfortable to you. Shredding, feelings, whatever you want!

Also I forgot to ask, what made Celia's fear hard to feel? Was it that I was mentioning it too often? Did I describe it in a flat way? The ...

Heya there! I'm glad you liked this! Yeah, it's not as suspenseful as the last one. I actually was going more for character development (and some plot). I tried to ...

Hi Chrissy, nice seeing you, haha! I'm happy to hear that this chapter is doing good! I like that you like Celia and somewhat like Irma. Stiff, proper, trying to ...

Hi donizback, I'm doing fine, I hope you're doing fine as well! It's fine that you didn't read the first part -- I appreciate you reading and commenting this one ...

Hi thank you for reading, and that's okay! Comments of any kind are welcome -- good or bad. I'm glad to see that you love this. Thank you so much ...