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i like alex's character. he's interesting. “Your father is going to kill you for this.” He said. you should replace the period with a comma, and lowercase the h in ...

i'll start off by saying: i liked the descriptiveness in this. it was great. everything was easy to picture and it helped me, a lot. i'd only edit the grammar ...

wow, surprise. i did kind of see that coming (adam liking mari), but it was nice. Flipped on the T.V., I was interrupted with a sound I didn’t want to ...

thanks for the advice, everyone!

wow, wow. this looks so cool. i love how it shows a heart in the middle. it's so colorful, and pretty. (:

i thought that this was wonderful. i'll have to agree with some of the other people, i'd just work on punctuation a bit. i think you only have one problem ...

A/N: part two! reviews are requested. // UNDER RECONSTRUCTION \\ "—Lydia?" The familiar voice knocked her out of her distracted state and Lydia immediately replied, her voice shaking. "Y-yes?" Kenne

thanks for helping me! i really appreciated it(:!!

A/N: i'm really sorry about the hyphens and x's, i'm just trying to keep you guys away from being confused and all of that! and sorry about the length (if ...

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the plot, overall, is pretty good. i'd just revise this by using grammar properly. commas, apostrophes, colons-- that sort of stuff. just clean it up a bit, and it'll turn ...

Going Under Major Reconstruction

his name made me giggle XD but i liked the story overall. i've checked out your other works, and i must say that you're really good(:

i didn't understand what was going on... the ending caused my eyebrows to knit in utter confusion. try clarifying things. i do like how she always says tctch, or however ...

i know exactly how syd feels-- i'm guessing like most people--, but still! i love the description, even if i do feel bad for her. but i can't wait to ...