collin

why are youput apostrophes in random places? "You did not ca'ch me!"...?????? When I read this I thought you wanted me to pause at the apostrophe. It doesn't really make ...

If you go to Orson Scott's website, there's writing lessons from the author of this book. He even talks about writing Ender's Game. The lessons are really constructive and they're ...

I thought it was pretty good. You just need to add a couple of spaces between words there towards the beginning, two instances I think. And is this a sequil? ...

Grammatical errors make people stop reading posts and sigh. Proofread your work several times before posting it for the public's eye. from the first little bit: "Two months—it’s been two ...

I really only have one thing to comment on, other than that one typo sentence towards the beginning. Could you describe this creature a little more? I had trouble figuring ...