colie18

Hi, First I want to let you know that I think its a great idea to write poetry, its just a way to get your feelings out, and the fact ...

Little by little day by day my pain goes deeper and never goes away! I don't have the scars for you to see but don't you realize? I'm just not ...

I have never felt this before. I don’t know what it is. Can any one tell me? ‘Cuz I just don’t understand I dream about him. I think about him ...

First! I love the title!!! it goes so well with the poem! 2nd the poem was beautiful, it showed a lot of imagery, I was able to see the whole ...

Great poem! Definitely something to make you think! I liked how you used more sophisticated words! it helps. Keep Writing! Good Luck! feel free to message me with any questions! ...

I liked the poem a lot. It had a lot of imagery and a lot of meaning. However in opinion I don't think it flowed well enough. You are on ...

I go through everyday With a smile on my face To disregard the pain That is eating me away No one realizes This smile Is fake! I am hurting everyday ...

VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN... I loved the whole deepness of the story. keep on writing. colie18

What Happened? What happened I thought you were my friend. Now you just walk pass me not knowing who I am. You found someone new she replaces me a little ...

well writin.. very well done.. i love it.. keep writing keep up the good work

awesome.... imagery and awesome words used... keep writing