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colie18

  • Writing Tips Re: I Don't Know Where to Begin...

    Hey Guys, I am having a lot of trouble. I have tried to write about many things but I never seem to be able to finish it. I don't know ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hell's Rollercoaster

    wow I really like this. It kept me entertained the whole time! I enjoyed it very much!!! I found it interesting and no grammar or spelling mistakes at all! :)

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: An Angels Wings

    Thank You all! And yes it is a true story of my mothers battle with cancer. She died when I was 4 years old on Christmas. Thank You! I am ...

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Will You Fly With Me?

    After reading your poem here, I am at loss of words. This was beautifully written and even better with a picture to go along. This was inspiring and I absolutely ...

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: An Angels Wings

    You took a path That led to a better place Not but 12 years ago You flew with the angels To see the man That stood in so many of ...

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Everyone is perfect in an unusual way

    Hello! WOW I loved it so much, it is very inspirational! I do have one suggestion, maybe put it in this format the stanzas will make it stand out more! ...

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror

    Hello! I loved this poem! Its meaning struck me easily. You had a few spelling mistakes but otherwise I loved it. XOXO colie18

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Wannabe Good Guy

    Hi there! I loved how strong a abstract the poem is, it definitely caught my attention, I am not the typical one to review unless something catches my attention. I ...

    Nov 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Why?

    From the day that I met you Until the day that I die My love for you Goes deeper And never goes blind. The smile I showed you And the ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Sonnet of Silent Death

    I like the poem, although that pain that you are trying to show in the piece is long overdue, you lag on getting to the point. I like the poem ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Rape of Erin Aghdra

    WOW!!! its story was compelling and just beautifully written!! The rhythm was perfect and the point of the story was direct! I love it!!!! Keep on writing!!

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You.

    I like it the way its written and everything, but I feel like I have heard it before, its like some others I have read before. But keep writing

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Rain

    I really like it, and just how everything flows perfectly together!! Keep writing

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I was wrong

    Wow!! I mean... it flowed soo perfectly and it caught my attention just from the first line. WOW!!! I really do like it, please keep writing!!

    Nov 3, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Littlest Moments that Make the BIGGEST Memories

    Hi Guys, so this is the first portion of a novel that I am writing and putting up. I am in the midst of writing this book, it is a ...

    Oct 23, 2010


The only fool bigger than the person who knows it all is the person who argues with him.
— Stanislaw Jerszy Lec