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Re: Poem about splitting up
thanks
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: What I Love About You
Thanks for the nice comments I appreciate them S xxx
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Cramps
haha feel the pain. males of the world Next time you're like 'don't be so overdramatic' feel the snake within-ok that sounded wrong but hey I really liked this, who ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Rules don't exist
I like it-random as heck that's what I like to see It's free-verse for all you cretins who say it has no structure I like it The lack of structure ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Do You?
I think everyone has been so harsh, love I liked this poem muchly, yeah ok it was about 'typical teen stuff' but in all fairness don't they say 'write what ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: The Music of Dusk
I really liked this poem I like the ABAB rhyming scheme and the powerful imagery Very nice I look forward to reading more of your work. S xxx
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: My Rant About How Stephenie Meyer Annoys Me
I really don't like this poem Partly because I Love Twilight but also because it lacks depth, structure and a point really. Stephenie will NEVER read this and as for ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Just A Memory
this is really touching and emotional I like it well done =) Sarah xxxx
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Poem about splitting up
Was it supposed to be this way All those years thrown away Me, begging you to stay No contact from day to day Was I supposed to feel this bad ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: The play called "Our Life"
I really liked this song the whole idea of a life bing a play is fitting-sometimes we pretend, sometimes we make mistakes But the worst thing is when you realise ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur
I wish my mad mind could be as creative as yours "I'm a ballerina" weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Liked it mucho Sarah xxx
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Let Me Count The Ways
I'll twist up in literature and linen Take note what others have said Embrace my warm postion and read about poetry instead. ANY GOOD? Sorry if it's not, but I ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: How Could You?
I love this poem I know how you feel, if this is based on real life events. I love the accusing yet philosophical tone of this poem and how easy ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: A Teenager's Question
Who am I? I’m lost and cannot speak For now, in life, I’m distant and weak Unraveled and tattered are my thoughts Standing alone by the lullaby shore I’ll continue ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: A Bitter Metamorphosis
I Loved this poem very moving and meaningful I loved the part about youth's sweater unravelling-unique and original metaphor. I really reaaly like you work. You should get publsihed!!! Fabulous ...
Oct 29, 2008
