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Half Of You To Hold- CHapter 3:Love isn't like it is in Hollywood It was almost Christmas the next time we saw each other. Revision for January exams had all ...

Really good start I know what you mean, R and J were both stupid and melodramatic and wimpy I'm interested to see your take on this legendary story More please? ...

Half Of You To Hold-Chapter Two: Losing My Faith Autumn was giving way to winter, but that was not the only reason I was feeling so cold. I had not ...

Thanks for all of the reviews! I do lack in punctuation skills and I'm sorry about that My story is based on a true story-our story Maybe that's why I ...

This is a true story about a boy I loved and still do love. I've written it as fiction because it makes a good story. I've changed the names for ...

Heyyyy I liked this It was different, quirky, random and downright crazy Loved the feeling behind it though, it spoke to me directly Sounded like a person actually speaking in ...

Hey there :) I liked this poem, I think a lot of people have felt this way, like they're keeping stuff from someone they love and that they feel as ...

I liked this It wasn't perfect in terms of lexis used or fluency but I liked the overall sentiment. I didn't mean to hurt you/didnt mean to make you cry ...

I really liked this. Sadly, I know exactly how you feel. Betrayal is the worst pain of all, that people inflict upon us. To Hell with the guy who did ...

Hey Sofi First of all, I'd like to say that I won't criticise this in terms of grammar etc because it is, in my opinion, completely correct in terms of ...

Although I understand people's comments about it not 'flowing' etc, I liked it. If you take it for what it is, (in short a 'p***-take') it's actually quite funny. This ...

That was awesome I'm actually a little spooked right now I used to have China dolls that my Grandma gave me, but I had to give them away because they ...

I really liked this beautiful imagery, good rhythm Nice sentiment. Perfect poetry! Love itt Sxxx

I really liked this. Not one hundred percent accurate grammatically but whose is? I liked how you portrayed an embarrassing mum, we can ALL relate to that, that's for sure. ...

thanks for the comments S xxx