cnvalambrosia

I dont see what you should be embarrassed about. It's a story and it's down to earth that's all, taking the necessary humanly pace and what not. Just remember that ...

I decided to try this out of the blue. Wont you tell me if you hate it? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- She was found at the edge of the trees. This

Very clean, dark lines...focus point. The face is very nicely portioned and no one has perfect teeth. I like this piece.

It looks like a monsoon! This is very interesting! You had the perfect view point.

Dying Off looks so strange, I like it. I agree it is a challenge to get fireworks on film like that espacially if you have a digital camera that has ...

I like the idea and the way the light falls on the open pages. It has a warm glow combining the dark petals and it even looks as though the ...

You compose magic.

this piece is beautiful. It kept suspense with elegance. I'd love to see more of your work.

this is excellant. I agree with Seraph Tree the flow is very smooth. a Kind of ellegant. Not many writers can pull off the way your character introduced himself to ...

~ Risen ~ Part 2 Lucia quickened her pace as she reached the streets. She didn't want to speak back to the idle brained, pretend queens, and she could never ...

I like this piece very much. It' riveting .

thank you, for voicing your opinions. I understand what you're saying, because my mom said the same thing(Literature teacher). As you can see I ignored her. When I was writing ...

I'm sorry I found this so late!!!!!!!!!!!! It is so intriguing!............................ wait a minute. Aren't you gonna continue it?

Tick. Tock. Tick Tock. Tick Tock. Your adolescent heart punches at the anticipation of those last few moments. Your heartbeat falling in with the rhythm of the incessant clock on ...

I like the idea that your piece gives off. It hits home for me. You have no idea.(...or mayB u do...) However, I do not like the structure of it. ...