cnvalambrosia

hmm.. :) I like the simplicity of this piece. It's sounds like play-by-play action but conveys more than that. I espicially like the first line.

You better write more soon! I think this was a very great beginning. Your character thinks the same way as I do, so you must have displayed a very very ...

Risen Part 3 Lucia knew that she had been dreaming seconds before her eyes opened. She could vaguely tell the difference from the up and down motion of the real ...

LOVEN 57 in back&white is awesome!!!!!!!! Classic car picture.

These are great. I especially like the ones of the house. But i wish the one of the nail had turned out clearer.

There are gramatical errors that I think you need to fix --- they can distract the reader from paying attention to the meaning of the words --- Also more gorey, ...

Don't worry it's NOTHING like Twilight! If you are interested check out Part 2... And please, Let me know if I'm doing something right. Thanx.

I loved this. Devstating desire. Have you read Wuthering Heights? I think you might like it. I wasn't exactly clear on this so I'll ask You ... is her face ...

It's as though you threw real emotions into it. And you did it very well. :cry: Bravo

For this I have to say that you may have given a little to much background knowledge at the start. It, to me, disrupt the flow of the story. I ...

I can't say much more than what's all ready been said, except that I got into this story too. I just have to point out how similar Denial AND Daniel ...

His parents are insane. I saw them just like little orphan Annie's fake parents! gum, mustache, too much lipstick, everything. The Sneed guy sounds allright, though. What happens next? I ...

i am sorry, i dont kno much about poetry so i cant help you as much as i would have liked to. I liked this piece because the topic never ...

I like the thoughts it gives off... Injustice. unfairness. self-rightousness from the man of some impotance(who apparentlly is so sick that he can't even feed himself......poor soul :wink:) Some of ...

Since sooo many little details Have been covered allready I'd like to give the main character a psycho analysis just judging from her actions and thoughts.... She never liked the ...