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Re: All That's Left Of Him
yay for chopin! you have such a great grasp of dialogue, the conversation really flowed and had a really organic quality to it. i also really liked the dark humor ...
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Re: The Runaway
its a creative idea. i liked the line about entering a room of sanity in contrast to the way the bride must be feeling, crazy for feeling like something is ...
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Re: Rain Dance
Such a nice poem! I love the subject and the description of rain. It's one of my favorite things to listen to. Some of the lines could flow more easily ...
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Re: Hymne À L'Amour, chap. 1 & 2
1. There is something harsh in the way the early afternoon light beats down against the buildings, and sidewalks, and traffic of Kenmore Square. Something strangely violent in the way ...
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Re: On Seeing Bright Star
I thirst for something Not of three forms, Liquid, ice, or vapor, But something less commonplace And more rare, more filled with truth Than any scientific method can procure I ...
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Re: Stranger Nights Than These
On stranger nights than these, I have lain awake, Unmoving, but breathing. And with eyes closed, imagining you Beside me, Feeling your breath upon my face, Your kiss upon my ...
Nov 10, 2009
