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mm. i dont know. this was okay. =/ uhhhhm. yeah.

"Life’s too short, To fear and worry. Don’t take action, With unnecessary speed." no, this sounds to long and breaks it up too much. other wise bravo.

nice poem. =) i think for this subject though, it really needs to stand out. there are sooooo many poems out there about relationships, love, etc. so if you ever ...

bravo. true story? that was very good. nice going. hm... there's not much to say. this would be a great oral orientation, better, i think, than a story. yep. =|

well guys, i tried in my new one, but i feel like the charectors still aren't known. how do i change this?

Prolouge He held her tenderly in his arms. Warmth filled his body like a summer breeze, tingly and comforting. She whispered in his ear, "I'll never leave you." She whispered ...

ehh what the heck. i'll do it now.

oh wow, do you know what? im really sorry. i didnt even know there was a post before this one. i feel really stupid. i thought this was all there ...

hmmm. this is a decent story. the problem i find with it, is that it's just like every other story about being in the ocean and having to get to ...

thanks everyone, after geting a couple more reveiws im going to redo it in a little bit of a longer version, trying to include all the suggestions. i think they ...

thanks you so much! that was really bugging me. =]

ok, i did this and edited it, but it still didn't change to how i wanted it. Dear Mr. Jeremy Brighton, This is a letter to inform you that Caitlyn ...

__First attempt at a story. I've only ever written poems. Hope you enjoy!__ He held her tenderly in his arms. Warmth filled his body like a summer breeze, tingly and ...

wow, i think the way you described the different feelings is really good. they bring the poem to life. Guilt comes in packages so very small. It makes no entrance, ...

i love that song so much. death cab for cutie!!!! yay!!! anyways thanks for doing the song justice.