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Hey. This was, to tell the truth, very boring, like TL G-Wooster said. There was lack of description and again, and TL said, lack of emotion. It seems this would ...

Christmas is...well, what is Christmas? It's supposed to be holiday with excitement, a thrill for all ages. A remembrance of tradition, a celebration of customs and a little baby boy ...

That was beautiful. You have loads of talent. No kidding. *Gold Star*

Thanks so much everyone!

Ghost, I liked it. I think I derived my own meaning from it though... I'm not sure if my interpretation was what you were aiming at. I guessed that you ...

heh, how do i delete this?

Alright... thanks so much! I'm gonna get a few more reveiws, then I'll probably scrap it. But thanks. I tried. =) And I guess it was a learning experience.

That was very confusing. Beautifull, but confusing.

This was pretty good. I'm a lil skeptical about love poems though... there's so many of them, and so few of them are really worth while and good. This one ...

The Slaver Back and forth. Back and forth. Endless queasiness, Pitching my stomach Like a can full of rotten Mush. Women moaning Their pitiful cries. Of pain, of gut-wrenching Hurt ...

That was good. =/ Yeah. TONS of emotion. Thanks, J. You just showed me what it's like to have the reader feeling it.

Hum Ho. This is decent. Good work. I don't know. It's a little...well...add some more description! I mean...this could be a great poem. Seriously. But you need to bring it ...

I looovee this poem!! (The forest) It's so sweet. =) Alright, now I'm going to critique it. But whatever I say, keep in mind that I LOVE it! The Forest ...

Good poem. Unlike many others, I didn't feel the emotion. But maybe I have too high standards.That part might just be me. Alright, no one else has given you a ...