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Hi, I'm Clue. =) This was interesting. I think though you used roses as an example, you really meant the meaning to go deeper. This poem had an undercurrent of, ...

Hi, I'm clue. =) This is a bit lacking in emotion. It's all a bit bland. Good try. I would suggest that you read some poetry from people like Snoink ...

This was good. You have a lot of talent. Way to go. =) Gold star. --mary

hey snoink, actually, i think i'd like to work on a different poem. :smt085 sorry. Title:Broken Glass Genre:Lyric poetry Link: so sorry, i hope you wont mind. you don't even ...

Shards of shattered, empty memories My vacant soul Forever a sharp pain, To all who tread on it. Trickling over broken glass, Bringing the life-renewing rain Soothing coolness Washing over ...

heh heh heh. =)

I can't describe this poem in one word. Let me just say this. There are a TON of poems out there that are about suicide, or suicidal thoughts. If you ...

i like it a ton better. i would say its 99% better. very very very well done.

Hey, Baily. I'ma give you a full body crit. Hope you don't mind? You always make me laugh. You never make me cry. Please don't let these --This line throws ...

Surreal--Sorry, I was told that he was an atheist. :?

[s]Hey Snoink! This is a piece that I really would like to improve on. I've gotten reviews for it, but they are all positive and telling me that it was ...

This, all in all, is a very interesting topic. It seems while evolution has many facts of defense, there are people who still cling to the hope, or the assurance, ...

when i was reading the beginning i thought wow, this is going to be really good. and then i got to the end. it's not an end. it's a...thread of ...

Thank you dear friends, you did great things for me, --First of all, keeping constant capitalization at the beginning of each line helps the reader immensely. If a poem has ...

i like this one too. =)